Editing – Part II

Draft 4 is on its way!

Let’s have a recap shall we?

I drafted the Novella of the Redemption of Anair in a ‘Three Act” structure. My mum – an English Teacher – proofread it for mes by scene. I made a few grammatical changes and worked on my punctuation, thus producing “Draft 1”

This was then submitted to Thoth Editing for the “first round edits” wherein the content and quality of the work in general was scrutinized, thus leaving me with Draft 2.

Draft 2 was submitted to my beta readers and most of them got back to me with really helpful input. One beta reader is actually an editor in her own right, and her input was most valuable. As a consequence of this, I added an extra scene and added content to two extra scenes. Alas, I am still debating how to cut down on some of my wordier descriptions (only two or three) as advised by one reader. Nevertheless, Draft 3 was drawn up and prepared.

Draft 3 is now in the capable hands of Casey Fenich – Thoth Editing – Whom I am sure will cut sentences and attend to any grammatical, punctuation or technical errors as she sees fit. Money well invested, I might add.

Nevertheless, Draft 5 will have my ultimate approval as I will re-read this novella (again) prior to formatting and uploading it.

I do hope that one learns to shorten this process as one progresses in the craft!

Beta Readers – Part II

Much praise can be lauded upon those who take the time to go over your prose and see where things do not quite add up.

One of the most dedicated beta readers of TROA (“The Redemption of Anair”) was a tremendous help. He asked me questions about the cultures and the peoples – things which one cannot cram into one novella, but it is a great deal of extra material for future novels in the series. The antagonists are not the stereotypical “bad guys.” They are not Orcs or Uruk-hai but people.

The novellas which I have planned are aimed at painting the characters on all sides as people – all complete with their faults, flaws, loves and desires. I think that it bodes well for me that my beta readers have all seemed to identify TROA as a character orientated work first and foremost. All of the other factors, the world itself, the supernatural aspects, the conflicts etc., they serve to shape the various personalities whom I am portraying.

Another point which came across was that I had to be more aware in portraying chronology or seasons. The calendar for MY world is sitting in front of me and I have to figure out how to subtly show it to my readers instead of telling them. That is another thing which I have grown to love about writing; trying more and more often to “show and not tell.”

Nevertheless, having committed and awesome beta readers makes the whole process much more efficient and rewarding – the pre-publication feedback is invaluable.

The Cover – Part 1

The old adage “never judge a book by its cover” seems to be an unheeded one – if one were to ask me. The public do judge books by their covers. When it came to choosing a cover artist I had to consider a few things:

  1. Pre-Read Introduction – This allows me to tell a little bit of the story without it being read as well as to set the tone of the novella. People can see that there is a darker veneer to the story, that it is a story which has violence as an element to it and is not about a happy-go-lucky adventure.
  2. Visual Marketing – if the cover appeals to a certain type of reader they may even be drawn into reading the blurb to get a better idea of the story.
  3. Visual Presentation – I have invested a large part of my time and creativity in the text. I have even invested money in a professional editor. However, at first glance, nobody can see how serious of an investment I have made both personally and financially. I feel that potential readers also need to realise that it is a serious project by a serious author, both well written, well edited and well presented.
  4. Personal Reasons – I’m an artist. I put my heart and soul into my creations from my portrait work to my writing. I want most suitable visual presentation of my work – my first . Something which portrays my creation in the correct light (or lack of).

So, who did I choose to create my book cover? Fiona Jayde Media. Absolutely stunning book covers and knockout results. Yes, there will be a book cover reveal at a later date so stay tuned…

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The Beta Readers – Part 1

In my humble opinion, beta reading is a highly important phase of the editing process and one which cannot be overlooked.

There are numerous benefits by having others read your work for you – provided that they are honest and critical. I have asked my diverse crew to be as brutal as they need to be, but I am also interested in hearing which scenes or characters spoke to them the most – and WHY!? I have five people – four of whom I am not related to and they are getting ready to “hand it to me” 🙂 next week. What can I say? I need to have honest feedback if my story is to grow. Obviously, I asked people who are fans of fantasy to be my beta readers as they are a small sample of my intended readership.

Areas which beta readers usually cover (or aspects which cause inconsistencies which annoy them) can range from plot, the setting, the narrative and style of writing, character, continuity, consistency and many more. Now, this does not mean that I am going to entiedit myre novel according to every criticism which pops up, but this does help me look for repeated criticisms and give me an idea about what may need changing.

The period which I chose to send out the manuscript was after the completion of the second draft – so that before Casey of Thoth Editing can do her final edits and work-over of my manuscript (which will then be draft 3) – she may now receive from me a manuscript which has already been singed by public opinion, if not baptised by fire.

Needless to say, I really do appreciate my beta reading crew. They are definitely due for “thank yous” in the novel’s credits as well as a signed copy of the printed version.

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The Blurb

The blurb is my chance to introduce my story to the world in writing. It is so so so important and I must confess that it was probably the last thing on my mind regarding my novella, “The Redemption of Anair”

This is not meant to be an afterthought, as it is an essential piece of marketing, but perhaps for me, it was. I felt that I needed a story to blurb about before proceeding on with all of the marketing elements. Alas, somewhere between finishing draft 2 and looking for a cover artist, I realised that it was time to sit down and conjure up a blurb.

This is my blurb – at present:

There are those who would say that Anaìr Torgayl is unworthy of the office of Chief Warden. A philanderer, an alcoholic and an aspiring painter from a household in disgrace are not the qualities which his folk normally seek in a War Leader. But darker than the rumours which follow Anaìr are his deeds in battle and his actions in previous conflicts. Indeed it is Anaìr’s past experiences which bear partial responsibility as to why he behaves the way that he does and why he paints out his anguish. Surely, one would ask: “how can a man who has found no peace within himself possibly aspire to restore peace to his homeland?

 Yet when the odds are severely stacked up against the Solati people, it will take a steady combination of both courage, tenacity and creativity to stem the tide of invading Orvinarr warriors who have defiled the Sacred Motherland with their presence.

“The Redemption of Anaìr” is an expressive and vividly written tale which paints with words one man’s quest for deliverance.

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Map Design

It is an essential element to helping readers of a fantasy novel ground themselves in a new world – or so I am inclined.

When it comes to choosing media design for a project which I am passionate about; there was not question that I would need an artist who appreciates the genre. I searched, I scoured and I scrutinized until I came across Sarah Evelyn Art. Alas, I will only be uploading two pieces of the map, so if anybody would like to see more of it, then please buy the book 🙂

Editing – Part 1

There is NO WAY that one can hope to self-publish a piece of writing without the support of a capable editor! Even if one wishes to submit a manuscript to a publisher, it is totally worth investing in an editor to go over your work one way or another.

I have chosen an incredibly capable and patient editor. My first draft was submitted chapter by chapter and it passed between us until I was satisfied that draft 2 was something – if a little rough around the edges – which I could show to other people (beta readers – which I will cover later) for mild burn, if not a baptism of fire by the readership and the reviewers.

Casey Fenich of Thoth Editing gets my vote for a number of reasons:

  1. Casey is Thorough – No stones were left un-turned in my manuscript; aspects of proofreading, bits which were inconsistent or didn’t flow, they all got marked and received a comment.
  2. Patience – This is my first novella, so I bombarded the poor editor with questions at the beginning. Still do sometimes…
  3. Great Business Etiquette – It makes life easier to deal with somebody who is polite, prompt and to the point.
  4. Good Grasp of the Story – It helps when the editor also understands the genre and also the nuances of the sub-genre. This means that my editor understands the tone of the narrative and the message(s) and feelings which I am trying to convey
  5. Communication – It is really important to have clear communication with one’s editor. I am more than satisfied with the way Casey explains changes and suggestions to certain aspects of the story.
  6. Affordable – I find Thoth Editing to be reasonably priced in their services.

This praise list can go on and on but I definitely recommend Thoth Editing, it is an amazing thing to see one’s manuscript brought to life and honed into a more concise story.